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GonnaLearnThis2day t1_j9it61s wrote

I'm sorry, but that isn't correct. There is no conflict between 'being hydrated' and a 'need for water', while there is a conflict between 'control' and 'trust'. And that's what you want in a story: inner conflict that the character will work on and grow.

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literattina t1_j9it0uz wrote

Nothing is quite like Harry Potter, but you could try some of the other popular fantasy series.

You have the Hunger Games, His Dark Materials, Percy Jackson and the Olympians, The Mortal Instruments, Inkworld, The Inheritance Cycle, Abhorsen.

These are all series of books I’ve loved around the time I read Harry Potter, maybe some of them will interest you.

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GonnaLearnThis2day t1_j9it074 wrote

That's a typical concept of writing: the conflict between a want and a need. Characters (and people) often don't grasp what it is that they need to be whole.

So if their goal is idk 'get rich' look at the underlying motive. Here for example '(assumingly) being more attractive to women', and think about what it says about the character and a problem of his and if there could be a better way to tackle this problem. Here his problem could be 'lack of self worth' and a better strategy would be to love yourself.

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scarybirds00 t1_j9isaza wrote

My local book club has a leader for each month. It’s the month that they recommended the book and is usually hosted at their home. If they cannot host, someone else hosts the actual physical space but the leader picked the book and therefore helps run the discussion by bringing discussion questions/topics.

I usually prepared by reading the book (duh) and then reading online book club questions in anticipation of questions or discussion topics so I could be helpful in keeping conversations flowing

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touchgrassbitch t1_j9iqnqj wrote

Was it always easy for you to create examples? I’ve always been awful at trying to explain with examples.

I would like to get better at it but it’s so bad. Like no correlation whatsoever. Is there even a point in trying to improve in that area?

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JaythonBlake t1_j9iqf19 wrote

Think of it in easier terms:

When your core commitment is being hydratet your need will be water.

You want to be satiated so your need for that will be food.

What's not written but implied here is a state of deprivation (thirst, hunger).

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