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AngryGungan t1_j1q6cdu wrote

Well done! If I had to give some constructive criticism though; I'd say it could use some bigger idle motion details, where people are chatting, have their scarfs moved by wind or something or the gentle swaying of the balloon. Also, I'd put in more colored details to help guide your eyes through the image.

I don't like the movement on the flag one bit though.. Very unnatural.

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diminutive_of_rabbit t1_j1q5gup wrote

I get the sense you are not a trained artist and just enjoy painting and getting emotions out that way? If so, keep learning and playing with things like brushes and I’m sure you’ll find you can also integrate elements like painting with your hands if that feels right for the piece.

You seem to have a good natural sense of form and space, as well as an ability to communicate a concept (if more crudely here). You are set up to make some really cool stuff and grow a lot as an artist if you wanted to learn more about tools and technique.

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